Such a moving article, Dawn, thank you for your vulnerability. So sorry for your loss and the guilt and pain that comes with it. Thanks for giving us a glimpse into this window so we can have compassion if we meet someone to whom this happened.
I agree with Michael, the story is well told and worth a bigger read. I would suggest taking it down and reposting it with the image at one of the two bigger sizes, and click on the subtitles and then the smaller of the T’s that show in the box that pops up. this correctly formats them. Medium will pass up an other wise good article that is not formated in their style. not sure why, but there it is. I have had friends re-post and get curated. and yes, break up the long paragraphs if you go this route. and all the best!!!!